Guilty for what?

All I wanted was a little closure

Don’t you get that?

We were excited to see each other

We agreed for a fact

 

It had been so long since back then

I felt as if there was a time

A time I had missed

To say the real goodbye

 

And so we meet

And we had fun

And so I left with the doubt being none

Of what I had accomplished

 

Then what do you do?

You assume there is more

More than is there

You know that behavior I cannot adore

 

Now I am guilty?

Guilty for what?

You brought this on yourself.

I am not sorry about your damn luck!

Author's Note

I don't care about the grammar. I just had to write this...

Reviews

[Silere]

Yeah ..sometimes it's good to just let the words flow..

Thank you for sharing!

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

very well written

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is sad and powerful. Disappointment leave us hurt for a long time. I like the conversation and the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[WriterSki7]

A piece written to express a feeling of anger or resentment (from what I can tell)
You requested grammer not to be broguht up, so I shall hold my tongue.

[NoAirToBreatheXSuffocat..]

you got ur ponits across, very well dont starfox

[Ruth]

Hopefully it was cathartic! Good piece xx

[The Analog Kid]

I don't know if this is autobiographical, but sounds like it. I had something like this happen to me--partially by my own interest in rekindeling a friendship, of course, on Facebook. It started to get out of control on her end. We were to meet that one last time to say goodbye, and I canceled, blocked her from texting, email, and FB. I wrote some on the subject (will send it to you). Anyway, very powerful, "shot across the bow." Good short, direct phrasing!

[The High Poet]

Very powerful! I enjoyed reading this one. Great points in this poem, I like it because it reminds me of a post break up. Keep up the good work :)

the high poet

[MissWordSmith]

hm.. unique thoughts here

[Frantzuu]

very well done, your get your point accros well here. great write.