Guilty for what?

All I wanted was a little closure

Don’t you get that?

We were excited to see each other

We agreed for a fact

 

It had been so long since back then

I felt as if there was a time

A time I had missed

To say the real goodbye

 

And so we meet

And we had fun

And so I left with the doubt being none

Of what I had accomplished

 

Then what do you do?

You assume there is more

More than is there

You know that behavior I cannot adore

 

Now I am guilty?

Guilty for what?

You brought this on yourself.

I am not sorry about your damn luck!

Author's Note

I don't care about the grammar. I just had to write this...

Reviews

[Ashley Black]

very good job i can realte to this very well. i always enjoy your poetry keep it up :)

[MagiCrystal]

Closure is not a good bye for some people.. they need a black letter or a funeral.. LOL
guiltiness is just in the torment of people who does wrong and they do not know how to handle their own actions. I like your mind and the way you wrote this poem. or thoughts of you.. Closure. is finito

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I liked this poem, because it almost always happens, one final meeting after the break-up and everything is supposed to go to a place better than before. I have learned to just say "no" to final good-byes. Great subject matter; well presented!

[<3 Simply Rebekah <3]

it does rhyme effectively and its rather nice flowing,
I like it!
*thumbs up*

[Aldora Sparrow]

Wow. powerful

[Havatara]

I liked it. My only problem was in the third stanza it kinda seemed long and disjointed from the rest of the poem, especially the last 2 lines. Could you find a way maybe to split the third line into 2 lines and take out that last line altogether? Either way it's a great poem and I enjoyed reading it.

[Ecros Lathes]

It is good If you are mad then just let it out Good Job. :)

[E. A. Fielder]

this brought chills to me because I just happened to be going through that kind of situation. I felt like I really can relate to that poem, as straight forward as it was. Very well done!

[Luna Northstar]

hmmm, i like it; very well written

[☠☠☠&#..]

this one is really good
its the raw truth about life
this is what true poetry looks like in my opinion