Please forgive me....

This is dedicated to someone I hurt

You came back

I was so excited

Exponentially delighted

 

You told me how you were

I listened with delight

Your smile looked so bright

 

We talked for many hours

Dreaming of the day

We would meet and together go away

 

We would go to the beach

Talk and talk

Walk and walk

 

I never want to let you go

Please don’t leave

It would be hard to breathe

 

I know I screwed up

I made a mistake

Now all I want to do is stay awake

 

I want to talk to you

But alas I wait for your return

So that I can express my love and total concern

 

Please forgive me

That is all I ask

I hope I can live up to your task

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

A great write. the beginning really put a smile on my face. what hope, joy, so innocent. loved it.

[Coyote Poetry]

We learn too late what is worthwhile in a life. Poem tells a story of wishes and hope for better words and ending. Forgiveness is necessary. For our soul too. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tina Kline]

Very nice, I hope you're forgiven!

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i love the way your lines rhymed, beautiful write

[Luna]

This is very sweet and very nice rhyming. I hate it when I fall asleep while talking to someone I care about then you can't stop apologizing. Great write

[Keevan]

beautiful and amazing in every way. i loved it :)

[Jacqueline Lopez]

Woooah! This is beautiful. It' very nice and heart-felt. Loved it.

[The Analog Kid]

Catchy first stanza. Also, an introspective narrator. Like he's saying it to himself. Very good.

[A.Lee]

This is really good. Incredibly emotional... I can feel that it came from your heart.

[The Water Queen]

Very wonderful and emotional piece