Please forgive me....

This is dedicated to someone I hurt

You came back

I was so excited

Exponentially delighted

 

You told me how you were

I listened with delight

Your smile looked so bright

 

We talked for many hours

Dreaming of the day

We would meet and together go away

 

We would go to the beach

Talk and talk

Walk and walk

 

I never want to let you go

Please don’t leave

It would be hard to breathe

 

I know I screwed up

I made a mistake

Now all I want to do is stay awake

 

I want to talk to you

But alas I wait for your return

So that I can express my love and total concern

 

Please forgive me

That is all I ask

I hope I can live up to your task

Reviews

[Mitch*Dandy]

Love this poem... Really nice

[Chris Lotus]

I can truly relate to this. I like the way you envisioned brighter and nicer flashbacks before getting to the crux of the whole scenario. It truly does exhibit the deep desire that the speaker wants.

[deeps]

This is a wonderfully written write.
I can feel your emotions in this.

[The High Poet]

Great story telling in this write. I enjoyed reading it and was hanging on your words :) Thanks for sending me a read request :)=

[Haifa]

wow so beautiful poem I really like it. Well done

[Ruth]

Great use of words sweety! Great poem! xx

[HorrorMaster]

very nice. well written work

[Dread Solomon]

Awesome wording... Hope there is a chance that you could reconcile with him/her...

[Silere]

Very nice selection of words.. lot of emotions are felt within them. Great job! Great flow and very beautiful. Thank you for sharing!

[Purple Emo Angel Of Lov..]

i love it...amazing