Whispers
A Poem by
Levioshock
Just a poem I got from a little inspiration
Find me a word
Heed my call
Songs from a bird
Waiting on the wall
Can you hear me?
Can you not?
Please my angel
Don’t fear the dark
Nay the bee
Calm the trees
The Willow’s whisper
Your sweet kiss
Come to me
My dark eyed maiden
Play me you
Sweetened cadence
Take my hand
And follow me
While we rest
In the sea
© 2010 Levioshock
Author's Note
I want you honest opinions
Reviews
This is a wonderful write here.
I really enjoyed this.
Amazing flow and rhyme.
Posted 14 Years Ago
A very peaceful and poetic poem. It Rhymes most of the time and the form is great. Great job.
Posted 14 Years Ago
A very peaceful and poetic poem. It Rhymes most of the time and the form is great. Great job.
I didn't see anything that I could possibly say was wrong with this. it was really cute although it seemed a little choppy,but i enjoyed it that way. It was realy good. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I didn't see anything that I could possibly say was wrong with this. it was really cute although it seemed a little choppy,but i enjoyed it that way. It was realy good. Thanks for sharing.
This is a great poem. The imagery is beautifully portrayed and the flow of the poem is easy to follow.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is a great poem. The imagery is beautifully portrayed and the flow of the poem is easy to follow.
I like this, it's sweet. Made me smile. Great job! :D
Posted 14 Years Ago
I like this, it's sweet. Made me smile. Great job! :D
wonderful as usual!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
wonderful as usual!!!
AW! This is so good! And sweet! Not the silly serious stuff either, just a nice poem
Posted 14 Years Ago
AW! This is so good! And sweet! Not the silly serious stuff either, just a nice poem
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Levioshock Copley, OH
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My writing is dark. I don't know why, it's just what comes out of me. I love writing and I love reviewing writing so give me all you can. If you want to get to know me, hit me up on facebook :)
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