Whispers

Whispers

A Poem by Levioshock
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Just a poem I got from a little inspiration

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Find me a word

Heed my call

Songs from a bird

Waiting on the wall

 

Can you hear me?

Can you not?

Please my angel

Don’t fear the dark

 

Nay the bee

Calm the trees

The Willow’s whisper

Your sweet kiss

 

Come to me

My dark eyed maiden

Play me you

Sweetened cadence

 

Take my hand

And follow me

While we rest

In the sea

© 2010 Levioshock


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This is a wonderful write here.
I really enjoyed this.
Amazing flow and rhyme.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A very peaceful and poetic poem. It Rhymes most of the time and the form is great. Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I didn't see anything that I could possibly say was wrong with this. it was really cute although it seemed a little choppy,but i enjoyed it that way. It was realy good. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a great poem. The imagery is beautifully portrayed and the flow of the poem is easy to follow.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this, it's sweet. Made me smile. Great job! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


wonderful as usual!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


AW! This is so good! And sweet! Not the silly serious stuff either, just a nice poem

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 12, 2010
Last Updated on April 13, 2010
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Levioshock
Levioshock

Copley, OH



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