Bliss

Bliss

A Poem by Levioshock
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Just a thought I had

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Hate is anger

Anger is rage

Rage is passion

Passion is desire

Desire is love

Love is bliss (sometimes)

Bliss is the states of mind we should all hope to have

© 2010 Levioshock


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this is very good!
I enjoyed this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it. Short and sweet with a very good concept and idea. Good Job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


WOW!!!! very good -claps-

Posted 14 Years Ago


Short, but Wow!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simple, but as I said about your other poem (In my Darkest Hour), the message is profound. You know, I've always been told that to hate someone you must have loved them, but it never made sense to me before. But from this, I can really get it. I don't know if I agree with the idea that to achieve bliss you must first experience hate, but I respect the idea anyhow. ^_^ Great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very interesting... And blissful :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like how you started out with hate, turning it into bliss and love. Very creative and interesting. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work.:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yes you are correct. In the heat of bliss. Best hold on. Like you stated(sometime). Need to swim in the pleasure when you are young and strong. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simplistic, yet, amazing! I like it a lot deary. Though, I find bliss to be the feeling you get when you take three anti-depressants at once... False happiness.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this. All of it is true in my opinion. I think you did a good job on this one. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Levioshock
Levioshock

Copley, OH



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