In my darkest hour

Just a feeling some have gotten when they fail school

I feel like my heart was ripped out of my chest

From my failure

People always told me “you are the best”

But I never saw it

 

I failed

I tried

I failed

I cried

I failed even though I felt like I could fly

 

In my darkest hour I am lost

My future uncertain

Unable to trust

My life’s fruition

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was a good poem. It reminds me of when I fail in school. I get grounded when I fail, but I pick my grades up. You should not feel that you're a failure. You aren't. You weren't born a failure and you will never be a failure. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Dahlia Phoenix]

When we fail, we feel like we don't have a reason to keep going. The position one puts themselves is difficult. Great poem and I can relate to this from my past.

[Cats Eye]

This is a good write, I know I have been in this position as I'm there are plenty more of people to enter these tracks as well

[Elizabeth]

Life is never stable; so I've learned to to trust anything, especially the future.

I like this because your words are simple but their meaning is profound. It's a story almost everyone can relate to, that eventual fall from grace. Great write. ^_^

[Alex W]

I fear nothing but failure, I HATE failure.

I can relate to this poem, not entirely because it looks like you feel worse than me, but I like the point of this piece. Kudos!

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is how i feel when i fail, in different situations , not only in school. very good write

[MoonlitAngel]

Interesting, and a very good poem to say the least. I can relate to it easily, which is good in writing. Makes more people want to read your work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Life can be a bear. At long as you stay away from those a*****e loan companies. Save money and travel. Work is work. Need money. Need to look above the B.S and try to find purpose and reason. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Comatose]

This is a very nice poem...great imagery and emotion ^^

[JenLyn]

This was a good poem, don't get so down on yourself because you may have failed a class or even an entire semester things just happen but it doesn't mean that you're a failure. The only part I don't like about it is line 9 it just seems to mess up the flow a little but overall nice write. Keep it up! :)

[QuietPoet]

Your not a failure, you tried your best and you keep doing so. I liked this poem, keep your head up, school is never easy, hope things get better.