Fight

"I don`t mind dying" i told him

But he stood there.

"I aint afraid of you man" i shouted

But again he stood there

"Listen buddy i`ll take ya anyday, you keep standing there and i`ll have no choice"

He stood the same, same look, same pose

"I`m warning ya, last warning"

Nothing

"I`m gonna do it"

Nothing

Reviews

[Mehameha]

Great scene. I saw the same scene but it was a drunk trying to take on a statue, true story. Is this the same guy? Loved the way you told it. Small critique, the "I's" should all be capitalized unless this was your intent to leave them lower case. It is poetry and anything works.

[Levendy]

Haha it was a drunk guy staring at himself in the mirror, but you're right I should have capitalised the "I's" would have worked better.

[Mehameha]

I have a short "Mirror" piece, same idea no dialogue, but check it out if you get time.