Making Love To The Rain

Let's make love to the rain....

Making Love To The Rain

Did you ever taste the rain?

Salty little drops of bliss at the tip of your tongue.

 

Did you ever feel the heavenly shower

Trickle down your thirsty skin?

 

Did you ever bear the weight of soaked clothes

Wrapping your frame so tightly,

It became hard to breathe?

Did you feel the pleasure of sweet suffocation?

 

Did you ever inhale the intoxicating scent of wet hair?

The long strands hanging loosely down your bare back?

Did you feel it tickle your sensitive skin?

 

Were you ever a slave to heaven’s divine downpour?

Did you ever make love to the rain?

Author's Note

I love the rain...and I love Love, so I blended the two together. What do you think?

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice poem...Thank you for sharing ...:)..............

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thanks Sami:-):-):-D.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)............

[~VertoAtrum~]

This poem was written in such a way that I could almost feel the rain on my face and my clothes sticking to me. It's actually raining outside right now where I live, and this is making me really want to go out there and dance ^^ Great job, pulls you right in

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thank you so much for that sweet review:-):-):-D.

[KeeD]

omg I can taste fresh rain water on my lips as I read this poem.. those soaked clothes made this lonely boy feel like he wasn't so alone for that moment :) this was beautiful.. it spoke the truth about nature how it can be the most caressing lover in times of a dry life. I almost want to see you do an opposite to this piece as well, breaking up with the rain or something, where the rain can be a vengeful source.. excellent poetry ! < 3

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Aww Kee, as long as you have nature (and well maybe the Internet lol), you are never alone:-D. And yeah i can do an opposite. I just need to think bout it a bit and just have an idea strike me.
And thanks so much for that review. It means a lot:-):-):-D.

[Onku Ghosh]

Excellent piece.....result of the union of the rain with love. What imagery....I felt as if I could see everything unfolding before my eyes.Very descriptive.LOved your poem

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thanks a lot:-):-):-D.

[Anna a. S.M.]

Oh yes, tasting the rain can be so wonderful :)
I really like your poem!

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thank you so much:-):-):-D..

[Leigh]

Love this and yes I have tasted the rain and its great, but not all the time

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thanks Leigh, and yeah it sometimes depends on the mood:-):-):-D.

[ansemanco]

I really like this because it is so easy to envision. A place we've all been in before, but you've put it to words. My favorite line is "Did you feel the pleasure of sweet suffocation." It's beautiful.

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thanks so much. Im glad u liked it:-):-):-D.

[SamanthaSweeney]

Love this.
You make such a natural and common occurrence sound sensual and blissful.

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thanks so much:-):-):-D.

[C Mack Lewis]

An pleasure to read! Very sensual...

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thanks:-):-):-D

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I so enjoyed your probing questions and descriptive vigour, really great writing, very well done

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Thank you for both of your reviews...it means a lot:-):-):-D.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

A very specific image of engagement with the rain, I must say.