A senryu about reckless love

Reckless love is more dangerous than gentle hate, the consequences are more severe.

I was reckless and brash

I couldn't hate her

though I hate loving her

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

Yep, I've been down THAT damnable road myself a time or two Lethu, my friend. Unless a man was born under a rock, I wager to guess we all have been, at one time in our lives or another...

[Leslie Philibert]

a nice write that gets it right !

[Sami Khalil]

A good read and write...:)

[Frieda P]

You've captured that feeling in a few short lines, good Senryu.

[Sarah Khalil]

Oh this is very, very sharp. I love haikus and senryus because they absolutely have to be, and when done right, the impact of the poem stays with you long after you finish reading it. A whole entire story in three simple lines, all your own, but also everyone else's.