Her Locket, His Noose

Her Locket, His Noose

A Poem by Eslynn

I hope that you hang my words
like a noose around your neck.

One more slip up and you choke

(one last word before you go).

You’re taking envy like candy from a strangers hands.

She was such a lovely maiden,
ruined by a selfish man.

Golden gates laced with wild flowers,
the gardens lock was hidden away.

Warm winds and sweet innocence,
time has changed epitome to dust and decay.

Let the regret weigh you down,
the shackles of your life.

The lies ruined her.
Let my words be the rope,
and I’ll see to it that you hang.

The last remedy, the remedy for your “love”.

The forgiving are forgotten,
and this town is heading to Hell.

© 2008 Eslynn


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Your words are so powerfully driven, and each phrase so vivid, filled with biting pain. Awesome piece!

Craig

Posted 16 Years Ago


Fine job this shows your talent well, Kudos to you :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


I love your writing, Stephi! You can take anything and make it sound amazingly beautiful!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I really like this piece Hun...but is there something going on?
is this a personal release piece or just watever
call me

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Eslynn
Eslynn

St. Louis, MO



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My name is Eslynn. I enjoy writing stories about the paranormal. As of right now, I am trying to improve my writing skills. I have a book series in progress, titled "Fifth Avenue", which hopefully wil.. more..

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