Butterflies Burn Me Down

Butterflies set on fire,

the flames will never die,

and love will soar us higher,

this is a crash coarse in romance.

There are lies behind truths,

but little truths behind lies,

I don’t know what to believe,

yet I know we need to try.

Butterflies set to flames,

they flutter in the air,

you try to catch them with a net,

and they’ll only burn straight through.

Butterflies set on fire,

the flames will never die,

and love will soar us higher,

this is a crash coarse in romance.

 

Author's Note

just something I'm working on for Creative Writing.

Reviews

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This is great! I loved the structure. It kind of looked like a butterfly. I loved the meaning behind your words. Very unique! I think this is the first time I have read about butterflies this way! Great work!

[M_S_Lay]

I like it. It expresses the burning of passions very well and how uncontraolable those passions can be

[Kimmee Jean]

i like the way the butterflies are destorying...grrr...evil butterflies