Not worth the effort

Not worth the effort

A Poem by Letemdangle
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Out of place, out of mind

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My connection with others.
Has been tenuous.
My love, given no weight.

I have tried and I cried often,
for the misery of mankind.
My presence during hard times,
does have a positive effect.

After which, I never exist.
Again, after small victory,
I stand alone. Happiness envelops me.

Until again, I am alone,
My heart of stone.
My head brooding,
to hold another in victory.

But I am again alone.
What a lonely place is this!

© 2011 Letemdangle


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Unfortunately, this is the reality of many people. Thoughts of another when needing something and like rain, forgotten until needed again.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We extend ourselves and are wanted only when others need something, then we are forgotten. I think sometimes parents feel this way..............very nice piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can fully understand this. Loneliness is a crushing feeling for me. As I've gotten older and wiser, I realize now that when I am by myself, I am alone with a killer.

Good writing, Thank you

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Letemdangle
Letemdangle

Ottawa, Canada



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My best achievement in life is never having killed anyone. My nickname is not to make you think I am morbid, I use it as a symbol of injustice. Let him dangle is a song about injustice from Elvis Cos.. more..

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