Caught

Originally written November 10th, 2007

Enchanted by the eyes that lure me in.
I can't stop myself to not be near.
I must get closer,
Somehow, someway.
It's too far away from civilization.
Beyond the star, the planets, and the moons.
Where no one can reach it.
It's non-existing.
A state of mind only several can reach.
Its wonderful.

Reviews

[ambur]

I like it. (: But the rhythm was a little off in the middle. I didn't know you wrote poetry :D That's pretty cool.