Spell Bound

I got you right where I want you.

And there is nothing you can do.

Becuse I got you wanting me.

Can't you see the possibilities?

I have your heart  locked up tight.

So don't even try to put up a fight.

I could steal you away with just one kiss.

I am everything you can't resist.

And now I have you under my spell.

But dont worry I wont tell . ;)

I got you wanting me,

For always and eternity.

 

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Amelie]

This poem is full of conviction from the persona, and somewhat sounds like the character is trying to enchant the person. I also liked "But don't worry I wont tell" it feels almost forbidden as if their romance is a taboo, it enables the readers to play around with their imagination. ;)

[CHRIS ANDES]

this is a great poem
...but i don't know why the word 'for' is repeated in the last line'
=]

[外人 (Gaiji..]

... scaring !! xD
well, i can't say you didn't put pathos in it !

[Rhea752]

wow this poem is amazing and sweet i love it

[Blue Ivory]

Sweet and seductive! I like this flirty tone!

[emman]

Wow..this poem can also be a spell :) nicely written..such a strong poem..very good! :)