Cold as stone

I am sick of these tears.

All I have left are my tears.

Somtimes I feel so alone,

That I wish I was cold as stone.

I wish I didnt feel a thing.

So I wouldn't have to know the sting of the pain.

Everyone thinks they know how I feel.

But these wounds need time to heal.

I am broken inside.

Feels like a part of me has died.

I wish I was cold as stone.

Maybe then I wouldn't feel so alone.

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

Sometimes the truth hurts so bad, we wish we couldn't feel and we look for that switch to turn our emotions off. But that switch does not exist, now does it? All we can do is be in denial. Shut ourselves off. People act like they understand, but you can't really. Not unless it's you yourself. Cuz it's hard to explain how you really feel. That's why we're here anyway. Writing, drawing, trying to express ourselves. This is an excellent poem! Nice work =)

[CHRIS ANDES]

every word can touch a heart
=]

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Honestly i'm falling in love with your style, so full of beautiful rhymes and incredible flow, also this poem, never the less, is full of pathos and technically speaking it's a respectable poem but personally speaking, i say:
GET OUT OF THIS AND DON'T YOU DARE THINKING THESE SILLY THINGS ! Whatever happened, i know you can make it through and even though i'm just a stranger you've never met in real life, if i can help, i'm here :)

[BatFan38]

That was awesome! You are an awesome writer!

[ROSALIND]

I know how You feel been there done that
read some of my deep poems the pain I cannot hide
and broken hear ted without you

[Rhea752]

this poem emanates sadness and raw emotion brilliant write keep it up :P