Walking Dead

I feel like I am stuck in this grave.

Just waiting to be saved.

It's like my heart was riped out of my chest.

But I guess you did your best.

Now I feel like the walking dead.

Not another tear will be shed.

If I cut will I still bleed?

Or is  pain what I need,

To bring me out of this state of mind.

That has caused so many to leave me behind.

But maybe I should stay like this insted.

And just be with the walking dead.

That seems fare.

Since no one else seems to care

 

 

Author's Note

This is how i describe my depression....I feel like the walking dead sometimes

Reviews

[Harry Alston]

The few typos sort of ruin my immersion, but the actual idea and imagery is nice.

[Dr. Wood ?]

it gets you like that, you describe it pretty well, but there are a couple of typos...INSTED....I know you know this....and riped....I do this all the time...just miss a key...thanks for sharing the poem

[Brittany DeFranco]

I have depression too, Maybe you should read some of my poetry to make you feel better, especially true meaning I love this btw

[Secret Lullaby]

Thank you and I will look at your writing for sure

[Brittany DeFranco]

thank you ^_^

[Secret Lullaby]

No Problem(:

[Blue Ivory]

I really like this! It's deep and dark and very emotional. You've described it well. This would make a really nice sad song, you know?

[Angelic Surrender]

Sad. Nice work though

[Roe]

very sad write.......amazing work

[Whiskurz]

A sad but beautifully written piece...Depression can be a lonely spirit....Great write.....Whisk

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

Very understandable and creatively written. Nice job with this one. A lot of raw emotion. That's hard to capture

[Daniel]

Your poems always go to these topics where everything is expressionally written into its correct form for its how the feeling overwhelms one, yup, great poem. :)

[Forevermore]

i love ur description, the depressingness is a beautiful thing at times. great write