Bullet Proof

Go ahead take you're best shot.

I am everything she is not.

I am bullet proof.

 

Go ahead and try to knock me down!

But do you even see a frown?

NO! Becuse I am bullet proof.

 

I won't even shed a tear.

Darling let me make this clear:

No matter what you say or do,

I will ALWAYS be bullet proof!!

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

yeah and that feels good to be bullet proof
=]

[jennifer little]

nice and lovely poem great job well done

[Tomislav Petricevic]

It reminds me of those times when we emotionally barricade ourselves in order to avoid getting hurt...but there is always the risk of hurting someone else by our barricade...
Good job, and I didn't notice any mistakes.

[Alex Vidmar]

This was amazing. Absolutely amazing. Reminds me of the song "Bulletproof" by Five Finger Death Punch.

[Roe]

wow i love this write!

[Forevermore]

i like the headstrong in this

[Daniel]

Mistakes? Where? If you do have mistakes, well then you have too good of writing for me to even notice actually.

[Lovely Soul]

Wonderful expression. I love this. It's good to stand up for yourself.

[Angelic Surrender]

I really like this. I am not usually girly or anything, but reading this makes me want to say "You go girl! Tell him who's boss!" I like the confidence and cocky attitude in this. You did a great job. Keep it up and you'll go far.

[just is]

This is wonderful, like the depth