My heart

My heart is starting to turn black,

With each and every lil crack.

I don't know how much more I can take,

Befor my heart finally breaks.

I am tired of all these childish fears,

And im sick of all these worthless tears.

My heart is bleeding out the rage.

I will use it to bust out of this love sick cage.

My heart just can't take any more.

So I am walking out of this Hell's door.

Then I will be free,

Of all these unwanted memories.

 

Reviews

[quinfinn]

very nicely expressed, but let me apologize for bursting this bubble...you are never free of those memories once you earn them, fear not...they make excellent fodder for poetry! you have a gift, use it to express this anguish as well as your happiness. very nice write indeed...

[CHRIS ANDES]

perfect rhyme
and i feel the same way
=]

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

Amazing. :)

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is very interesting piece! It's short but very deep.. i can feel it!
Thanks for sharing.. Well done :D

[Lovely Soul]

This is deep. Nice work

[Roe]

amazing as always! keep it up

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

AAh....coincidental!!, again i feel that this 'pennig' of urs is somewat describing my feelin( partially though, the previois one did much more)....neways...nice write..)

[Angelic Surrender]

I LOVE this. I can relate to this well. I know the feeling. It's not a fun one to have. Just gotta keep making your way towards Hell's door. One day, we will be free.

[just is]

WOW, simply awesome and haunting. I really enjoyed this write.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this!
I know how this feels! It is one of the worst feelings! :(
Great job though :D