What happend to you?

 

You were supose to be my friend.

We were supose to be sisters till the end.

But then you started acting fake.

Now I'm thinking that being your friend was a mistake.

In the halls you just past me by.

Are you not getting tired of living a lie?

We have come so far.

But now i don't even know who you are.

Why can't you be happy by just being you.

Whats the worst that they can do to you?

When I look at you all I see,

Is what used to be.

We made eachother strong.

Now everything just feels all wrong.

When we first meet it was like I found a missing peace of my heart.

We were best friends from the very start.

I am going to miss my soul sister.

When you see her tell her that I miss her.

Becuse you are no longer "you".

And I don't know what to do.

All I know is things have changed.

And you are no longer the same.

 

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

eachother-each other(13th stanza)
..very clever
=]

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Old friends perish, new friends arrive...and if your best friend turned away from you, then he/she wasn't your best friend in the first place.

[Forevermore]

damn, its sumn deep in this writeing i can relate to, but i like it, jus gets me a lil depressed when i think about it

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

what a change........that feel feels awkward......great write :-)

[wyrd]

ahh so many roads so many paths so many sad partings and choices made. comforting to know that I havent lost all that was. a voice speaking a pain remembered as distant echo its the sweetness of bitter nostagla ahh a whisper of remberance, remember, remember, remember when betrayal was a new and fresh sort of pain?

[Roe]

i know the feeling...great write

[just is]

I know the feelings in this write.
very nicely expressed

[WinterIce<3]

I also can relate to this. I like this poem it is very well-written

[Alex Vidmar]

I know how this feels as well.

[Lovely Soul]

I can also relate to this. It's a terrible feeling. Great piece