unfaithful

 

Last night I had a dream.

But It's not as simple as it seems.

   

     He has his hands on my hips

    Then began to kiss my lips

     I raped my legs around his waist

     Needing more of his taste.

    Our passion was just about to begin.

 

Then I woke up and that was the end.

In truth that was not just a dream.

But a lingering memory.

Of that one unfaithful night.

Now everything isen't right.

I wish that I could take it back.

Or that I gained a strength that I did lack.

And now I have to live with that shame.

Of knowing that I am only to blame.

I am sorry that I was unfaithful to you.

That was something I NEVER thought I would do.

Now every morning when I wake.

I have to live with my mistake.

I only pray that you will forgive,

Me, love,  for what I did.

Author's Note

OVER LOOK THE MISTAKES.....

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

the words seem so sincere
=]

[jennifer little]

nice poem i liked it great write as well

[UnderCompulsion]

Beautiful yet sad.Great write.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Deeply written personal piece. Nicely done.

[Angelic Surrender]

Nice. I like it :)

[WinterIce<3]

I like the syle in the poem and i like how your emotion of regretfulness comes mainly out of the poem everyone makes mistakes, luckily people can oversee them and forgive you

[Tomislav Petricevic]

A sad poem, but sincere. I like it, the imagery is very good if you ask me. But I think you need to forgive yourself and learn from your mistake; only then will you be able to move past it.

[eatmills]

I like the formation and style of your poem. The emotion of regret really comes out strong.

Chin up. We all make mistakes, even really bad ones. As long as we learn from these mistakes; do we grow stronger.

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

This is really amazing. It's very deep and personal, and you portrayed your emotions so well. Good job

[just is]

Oh this is sad really, i like how you broke it down
into a different writing style at the top.
Nicely written.