becuse I'm broken

 

 

My heart is broken.

It feels like you riped it open.

My soul is forever torn.

And this never ending pain was born.

To many secrets hide the truth.

But what do I have to lose?

These wounds just wont heal.

And The pain is all too real.

But I will not shed a tear.

I will not show any fear.

Even time can't heal this scar.

The cut just runs way too far.

But I only have myself to blame.

This memory that lingers in shame.

Sometimes I dont know what to do

But I know one thing that is true.

My heart will never be open.

Becuse I'm broken.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Alex Vidmar]

So true. I know how you feel. Beautifully written

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Been there. But, in a way, time really does help you heal a bit, because you'll start comforting and cheering up yourself. You'll probably open your eyes and learn from your mistakes. So positive stuff comes out of it too, don't worry.
For example, I started seriously writing poetry during my "Break phase" (I call it that way because the poem that started my work is called Break)
As for the poem, I like it a lot...it just sounds...sincere.
But maybe you should change the 6th line a bit, so it may rhyme with the rest of the poem.
But I still think this is an excellent work! :D