becuse I'm broken

 

 

My heart is broken.

It feels like you riped it open.

My soul is forever torn.

And this never ending pain was born.

To many secrets hide the truth.

But what do I have to lose?

These wounds just wont heal.

And The pain is all too real.

But I will not shed a tear.

I will not show any fear.

Even time can't heal this scar.

The cut just runs way too far.

But I only have myself to blame.

This memory that lingers in shame.

Sometimes I dont know what to do

But I know one thing that is true.

My heart will never be open.

Becuse I'm broken.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

real pain inside
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[jennifer little]

wonderful poetry great job keep up the good work

[TheArtOfInsanity]

I can feel the emotion in every line, even in every word, you're talent as a writer and as a poet amazes me, I'm in my senior year of high school, and I'm nowhere as good as you, keep writing.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is great and you're getting better as time flies by :)

[Roe]

very heartfelt :)

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

This is a beautiful poem. it's hard to put such clarity and raw emotions to words. very well done :) I liked it a lot

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

heartfelt, emotional write. nicely done.

[Yahzeya Yoel]

Very touching

[eatmills]

Edit darling. I say for the sixth line just hit enter after the question splitting the poem into two stanzas.

Such an emotional piece. So much hurt inside and I know this pain all too well. I like the moment when you have this screw you attitude with these two lines-
But I will not shed a tear.
I will not show any fear.

Your doing well keep going.