becuse I'm broken

becuse I'm broken

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

 

 

My heart is broken.

It feels like you riped it open.

My soul is forever torn.

And this never ending pain was born.

To many secrets hide the truth.

But what do I have to lose?

These wounds just wont heal.

And The pain is all too real.

But I will not shed a tear.

I will not show any fear.

Even time can't heal this scar.

The cut just runs way too far.

But I only have myself to blame.

This memory that lingers in shame.

Sometimes I dont know what to do

But I know one thing that is true.

My heart will never be open.

Becuse I'm broken.

 

 

 

 

© 2012 Secret Lullaby


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real pain inside
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Posted 12 Years Ago


wonderful poetry great job keep up the good work

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can feel the emotion in every line, even in every word, you're talent as a writer and as a poet amazes me, I'm in my senior year of high school, and I'm nowhere as good as you, keep writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is great and you're getting better as time flies by :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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very heartfelt :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a beautiful poem. it's hard to put such clarity and raw emotions to words. very well done :) I liked it a lot

Posted 12 Years Ago


heartfelt, emotional write. nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very touching

Posted 12 Years Ago


Edit darling. I say for the sixth line just hit enter after the question splitting the poem into two stanzas.

Such an emotional piece. So much hurt inside and I know this pain all too well. I like the moment when you have this screw you attitude with these two lines-
But I will not shed a tear.
I will not show any fear.

Your doing well keep going.





Posted 12 Years Ago



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It a new year and a new me. I have deleted my old information and have decided to start over. Life is full of ups and downs, disapointments, regrets, mistakes...but all these things make us who were a.. more..

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