Vampire kiss

Vampire kiss

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

I dread the vampire's kiss.

This thing that puts my heart at risk.

He sings his suductive melody.

That pulls me to my new destiny.

He leaves me with his poisness bite

All I know is somethings not right.

I have this unwanted lust,

That makes blood such a must.

I am now a creature of the night.

In my eyes there is no fright.

Know that im not as nice as I may seem.

For I am a face that will haunt your dreams.

I shall never forget the vampire's kiss.

Nobody's was as life changing as his.

Now to live I have to kill,

And my heart feels so still.

My life will never be the same.

Now that I play the vampire's deadly game

© 2012 Secret Lullaby


Author's Note

Secret Lullaby
I know there might be some mistakes .....

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I LOVE it!!I think this is one of your best works,yet.Maybe even the best one!Great job!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I few spelling mistakes, but It's pretty good

Posted 12 Years Ago


The red font color is clever, it fits in with the vampire theme. Rhyming sets a good rhythm, and the descriptions are vivid.
Vampires are awesome! Although, not those sparkly ones xD
All things considered, this is a very good poem, I liked it a lot! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 1, 2012
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It a new year and a new me. I have deleted my old information and have decided to start over. Life is full of ups and downs, disapointments, regrets, mistakes...but all these things make us who were a.. more..

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