Go Away!

Go Away!

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

 

 

All I want is time.

All I need is space.

The best thing you can do now,

Is get out of my face!

 

You never want to leave

You are always by my side.

Boy can't you see?

You make me want to hide!

 

We need to have a talk.

And give this relationship a rest.

Boy you are starting to scare me.

I think you're getting obsessed!

© 2012 Secret Lullaby


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Really great! I like the contrast between these "calm" lines and these more aggressive ones. It could make a good song, with aggressive parts as screams! Well done. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yes...yes. Very easy to relate to. Like'n it to someone who comes along to dinner, and you know dang well they hate the place your going... Please stay home.

Well penned!
Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ohmygosh, I love this and I think some people can relate to this. Well done, Leslie :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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