Go Away!

 

 

All I want is time.

All I need is space.

The best thing you can do now,

Is get out of my face!

 

You never want to leave

You are always by my side.

Boy can't you see?

You make me want to hide!

 

We need to have a talk.

And give this relationship a rest.

Boy you are starting to scare me.

I think you're getting obsessed!

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

short and complete
=]

[Lillianna Rey]

love it. me n my bf just broke up cause he was acting this way and it was sooo scary. it was to the point that i was afraid to break up with him and hes still messn with me. ill c him and hes like "wish we were back together" and "hey are u ok...u ok" i mean come on i dumped him yea im ok. anyways sorry to post my hole life story lol loved this great write.

[Alex Vidmar]

Relatable for both genders. Well done. Love it.

[paradise]

hmm very interesting pieec

[TheArtOfInsanity]

I like this a lot, my current girlfriend had a guy like this, they never dated, and it was never really a creepy way that he acted, but more so that you felt a little sorry for the guy. Keep writing :]

[eatmills]

I read this and sense a feeling of calm anger, ending with almost a fear of a victim confronting their stalker. A very cool write.

[No name]

really good write, very relate-able.

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

This is a nicely written poem. :) I like it, also very relatable. Job well done!

[SuicidePact.]

relatable :) !

[VannahBanana]

(: it was a good poem and it made me smile. (: it sounded something like what Ke$sha would sing