Here is my goodbye

 

As I leand my head on the window pane.

And each tear that fell with the rain.

I thought of you.

 

Of the life I now live.

How you did the things you did.

We will never be the same.

 

Your the reason I am feeling so bad.

Liveing a dream I never had.

But you got what you wanted.

 

Our love was never perfect.

And at some point it was all worth it

But now that is gone.

 

I am sick and tired of this never ending lie.

Of this horrible love crime.

Our time is comeing to an end.

 

So I hope you had fun.

With the boys and the rum.

Becuse when you get home.

Dont even pick up the phone.

I will not answer.

 

So go ahead and get drunk.

Becuse this love boat has finally sunk.

Now i am finally free

To live my own destiny.

And this, my love, is goodbye

 

 

Reviews

[Bridger Hall]

I like how you start out super sad and then finish accepting what had happpend. good work. fix yo typos dudette.

[Roe]

NICE write

[VannahBanana]

This is good Leslie.(: Good way to show him, a few typos, but it happens to everybody. I like the rhyming technique

[Unknown]

utterly impressed that i found some people who can use thier words the way you do

[ba_mcfarlane]

nice, it reads to me as the 5 stages of grief being the same as the 5 stages of lost love

[Tomislav Petricevic]

A great poem, and a great ending. I could really feel the words. Awesome job! :)

[Graggz]

wow oh!! my God thats very impressive , i like it very much and one just feels it right away