Land of dreams

Land of dreams

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

Your ocean blue eyes

Send me on an amazing adventure

To the land of dreams

 

Where anything can happen

And where our love can run wild

I am forever traped in the land of dreams

 

You are everything I have ever wanted

I hope this fantasy never ends

I hope I never lose sight of this land

 

 

© 2012 Secret Lullaby


Author's Note

Secret Lullaby
ok well idk if this is good or not?

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Wistful and nostalgic, clinging to that childhood naivity that you never really find again.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short, but holds a lot of meaning. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


its awesome, its short, its detailed, i love it. hope you continue to write more. i enjoyed this

Posted 12 Years Ago


It was short and sweet. I loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like the way you put together words

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it(: good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this one. Very good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good definaly good I really enjoyed it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


beautiful Short and sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think every girl hopes to find this "land of dreams" you seem to be talking about;)
Loved it. Great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 25, 2012
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