My Bloody Valentine

My Bloody Valentine

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

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On this day you celebrate love and joy.

But I have to celebrate the death of a boy.

On this day I should be happy and merry.

But all I can think about is the boy I had to bury

I still recall that cold Winter day.

When I found you laying still in the stacks of hay.

For in that gruelsome moment time had stoped.

As I looked upon every drop,

Of scarlet blood that had been spilled.

For my one true love has been killed.

I will never forget what once was mine.

I will always remeber my "bloody" Valentine

© 2013 Secret Lullaby


Author's Note

Secret Lullaby
This an old poem that I wrote when I first started writing. It is one of my favorites.I changed a few things here and there but its mostly still the same.

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Dark and Gothic..... Something i didn't expect on Valentine's day.....
The rhyming scheme added to the effectiveness.... A nice poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved this. It was gross and dark and creepy, and that's what made it so good. People expect Valentines Day to be so happy and joyful and all that s**t, but it isn't always like that. Stuff like what you mentioned in the poem actually happens. Therefore, I really liked this and I could relate and all of that stuff. Good job, 100100

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it! Ya, I'm a bit of a werido, so this kinda stuff intrests me. It shows that true love never lasts forever, no matter how long you may wish and dream. It's a poem for all those saddened by valentine's day. I love it! XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


It is creepy. What a terrible way to remember Valentine's day...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 13, 2012
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