My Bloody Valentine

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On this day you celebrate love and joy.

But I have to celebrate the death of a boy.

On this day I should be happy and merry.

But all I can think about is the boy I had to bury

I still recall that cold Winter day.

When I found you laying still in the stacks of hay.

For in that gruelsome moment time had stoped.

As I looked upon every drop,

Of scarlet blood that had been spilled.

For my one true love has been killed.

I will never forget what once was mine.

I will always remeber my "bloody" Valentine

Author's Note

This an old poem that I wrote when I first started writing. It is one of my favorites.I changed a few things here and there but its mostly still the same.

Reviews

[scripted]

WOW!!! This was sad but at the same time dark... I love the flow and rythme throughout this write. I thought it overall was a good write. Thank you for sharing, yous truely Danielle

[Steven Ingels]

Good write

[C.C. Marx]

A horrid thing to have to endure on such a loving day.....nicely done

[SamanthaMarie]

Brought a new gruesome twist to valentine's day...loved it :D

[James Hamilton]

Great!

[eatmills]

I can see why this would be your favourite personal piece. It would be mine too.

[AWickedMoon]

What a lovely poem. Very dark yet loving. :)

[Zachary_James]

Oh my stars, i loved this so much, i can't express it. Just wonderful.

[CHRIS ANDES]

sad words deepened the emotion in it
cruel world
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[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

A strong, yet somewhat morbid look of Valentine's day. I enjoyed this, though. Nicely done.