Prince of Paradise

 

 

Even the damned

Shall stand

As he falls.

 

The prince of Paradise

Has finally payed the price

Hell now calls.

 

His wicked ways

And deadly hase

Has cuased his demise.

 

About his black wings,

The angels sings

Hopeing that never again he shall rise

 

For the prince of Paradise

Has answerd the damned's  cries

And rule in Hell till the end of time

Author's Note

i was reading a book and thought of this...idk if it is good or not so plz tell me what you think

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

so true =]

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

It's a good write. I could feel the story. A Prince of Paradise seems like a good dream. I think you did a great job. Thanks for sharing.

[Lolageomfg]

Not bad...Not bad...I like it, this poem shows Faith mixed in with a hint of drama, a tasty mix to be digesting, good work keep it up. From lolageomfg "England" :D

[UnderCompulsion]

I think it's great!I really liked this poem.Great job! :)

P.S.What book were you reading?

[Michael Thrower]

What book were you reading? It sounds familiar, I like it!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Prince of a hellish paradise, I should say. But I enjoyed this piece. Nicely done!

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

It is very good..... Keep up the good work aye!

[Bridger Hall]

haha way good! i dont know if it is just me but my mouth can´t say Damned´s.

...answered the cries of the one damned
... answered the cries of the damned
i like your writing.. i´ll review more later!! good!