The Time Has Come

The Time Has Come

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

 

The time has come.

I'm ready to run.

Are you going to come with me?

 

The night has set

We can no longer rest

We must be ready to flee

 

The danger is near

But we must  persevere

we can not go back

 

The time has come

Let's welcome the morning sun

We are now free

© 2012 Secret Lullaby


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It makes a great poem for a book! I loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Brief and upbeat. I like it. Being the grammar/spelling nazi I am, I noticed a couple minor mistakes, "bust" instead of "but" and "lets" instead of "let's". I like the three-line stanzas and consistent rhyming; they make it seem more hurried and fast-paced. Nicely done. Thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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