Blond hair,Blue-eyed boy

Blond hair,Blue-eyed boy

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

Blond hair, blue-eyed boy

You were my life,my love,my joy

I loved you with all my heart

I loved you from the start

 

Blonda hair,blue-eyed boy

oh how you filled my life with joy

You gave my lips a simple tease

Laying in your arms in the summer breeze

 

Blond hair blue-eyes boy

You played my heart like a toy

You said you loved me one day

And now all I see is you walking away

 

Blond hair,blue-eyed boy

I guess I wasen't your most important toy

Becuse you are a lier,a cheater and a fake

Darling you were my biggest mistake

© 2012 Secret Lullaby


Author's Note

Secret Lullaby
this is for a guy that truely knows how to brake a heart....

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...great comprehension of the idea between every individual!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Clearly this person made you feel used,I feel like i'm in the same boat right about now.I liked how you were able to project the close bond that two people have only to them show that it wouldn't last.

Posted 12 Years Ago


stunning poem. very deep and raw emotions.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this. It hits a personal place with me and I can definitely relate. Not with the looks, but with the feelings. You did a great job of making it flow together so well with the repetition of the first line. Very, very good :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this one! I think you did an excellent job on expressing all of your feelings! This boy made a mistake ;) but you deserve better. Good luck.
Love truly, Ashley ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on January 19, 2012
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It a new year and a new me. I have deleted my old information and have decided to start over. Life is full of ups and downs, disapointments, regrets, mistakes...but all these things make us who were a.. more..

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