Blond hair,Blue-eyed boy

Blond hair, blue-eyed boy

You were my life,my love,my joy

I loved you with all my heart

I loved you from the start

 

Blonda hair,blue-eyed boy

oh how you filled my life with joy

You gave my lips a simple tease

Laying in your arms in the summer breeze

 

Blond hair blue-eyes boy

You played my heart like a toy

You said you loved me one day

And now all I see is you walking away

 

Blond hair,blue-eyed boy

I guess I wasen't your most important toy

Becuse you are a lier,a cheater and a fake

Darling you were my biggest mistake

Author's Note

this is for a guy that truely knows how to brake a heart....

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

...great comprehension of the idea between every individual!!

[Drew]

Clearly this person made you feel used,I feel like i'm in the same boat right about now.I liked how you were able to project the close bond that two people have only to them show that it wouldn't last.

[Reaper]

stunning poem. very deep and raw emotions.

[Alana McGuire]

I really like this. It hits a personal place with me and I can definitely relate. Not with the looks, but with the feelings. You did a great job of making it flow together so well with the repetition of the first line. Very, very good :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I really like this one! I think you did an excellent job on expressing all of your feelings! This boy made a mistake ;) but you deserve better. Good luck.
Love truly, Ashley ;)