where is he?

i think every girl feels this way at one point in there life

 

 

Snow White said that one day

Her price would come.

And i belived that too.

So where is he?

Littel girls go to sleep

And dream of there knight in shineing armer.

I did that too.

So where is her?

Littel girls grow up

And start thinking of their perfect match

I do that too.

So where is he?

Author's Note

But what i didnt know was that all I had to do was stop dreaming,get my head out of the clouds and look at the person thats been sitting right by me all this time

Reviews

[paradise]

very nice poem i really enjoyed it i like the reference to snow white and dreams

[Secret Lullaby]

ok i know i made alot of mistakes here..i was in a rush and and someone was REALLY being annoying while i was typeing this...so when i get the chance , i will fix it

[Reaching for the clouds]

Whoa.....lots of spelling mistakes here......

[The Winter Grey]

Prince Charming sucks. This poem doesn't :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Nicely done, well written piece. Only there are quite a few spelling errors and mistakes that should be fixed.

[paparapapa]

Movies, books, and songs have been painting the ideal picture and etching it into our minds. A girl meets a handsome guy who'll love her forever and they'll live happily ever after. However, once we grow up, we'll learn that this isn't always the case, leaving us broken and disappointed. But I guess there's nothing wrong with just hoping specially that you're still young. Be patient and just let it all flow. Live each day to the fullest and if he's destined to come, he'll surely come. Well, anyway, I agree with T. Wes Smith that you should edit your poem first before posting it. Here are some of the errors that I saw: "prince," "believed," "little," "dream of their," "shining armor," "where is he?" You should do some checking since these mistakes might discourage the readers to read more. :)

[T. Wes Smith]

very beautiful, young love is something that can not be duplicated as you get older, savour these moments, as you get older, love will never be so pure, but in its place you gain clearity within your paradigm, well done. one thing, just check your spelling, run it through microsoft word before you post it, so that readers can focus upon the beauty of what you have written and not how the words are spelled.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Believe me Leslie you will have Prince Charming one day.You are still young so enjoy life. God designed everyone with a soulmate

[Alana McGuire]

I looove Dinsey princess movies. :) I just wish they didn't program that there's a perfect prince charming out there somewhere. Hahah, but anyway, I really enjoyed this a lot. Nice job! :)