Do you Feel?

Does it make you feel strong?

To see her laying weak in the dirt.

Does it make you feel better?

Seeing her in pain.

Does it make you feel in control?

When she is powerless.

Does it make you feel like your world is complet?

When you strip away all her dreams.

Does it make you feel more of a MAN?

To feel her tremble under your touch.

Do you feel anything at all?

Reviews

[Geon Quuin]

This kind of reminds me of me. I always treated her badly. Every time I act this, I feel empowered. To tell you the truth, I think the b***h needed to be straightened up. My neighbor's dog always barked at me every time I pass their house. She even got loose once and bit me.

[Reaching for the clouds]

I like this. This is very relevant and identifiable to everyone. Good stuff!

[Bare trees]

This poem is a good way of confronting the evil that can emanate from a controlling person. The fact that you ended it with the words: Do you feel anything at all? is so appropriate to the situations and behaviors you've described. Nicely done.

Does it make you feel like your world is (complete?)