Do you Feel?

Does it make you feel strong?

To see her laying weak in the dirt.

Does it make you feel better?

Seeing her in pain.

Does it make you feel in control?

When she is powerless.

Does it make you feel like your world is complet?

When you strip away all her dreams.

Does it make you feel more of a MAN?

To feel her tremble under your touch.

Do you feel anything at all?

Reviews

[eatmills]

You are powerless as you want to feel - This is a lesson I've learned. It does not fail me to comprehend your words though. As a witness testimonial you have shared well. I know women whom are the predator and they too are very good at it.

[Daniel]

Uhm yes it makes me feel like crap o_e Nice write lol :3 certain dudes are just ignorant.

[B-poet]

Most insecure men feel in control when pain is substantiated in doses of jealousy. Great way of illustrating that with your poem. Great work. :)

[emmy bon]

men men men..... ma'am am speechless, so true questions, well written.

[ROSALIND]

Men always crave for power they always like to have the upper hand.
well written and i like emotion too

[Krista Weiss]

Got chills! Absolutely love this!! :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

this is a diresome poem with a great meaning behind it! gender wise i am speechless...being myself i'll agree with all the questions u ask in there! keep up the good work :)

[C.C. Marx]

A lot of good questions asked here, do guys really understand how they hurt us sometimes? Great work

[Time's The Bond]

I love it but in these kind of things I tend to feel pity for the man why? Because they are insecure and have a lot to learn for a man to do that to a woman or girl he must be quite weak and very pitiful.

WELL DONE

[Someones_Heartbreak]

Omg I love it:)