Blue Eyes

Blue eyes,

Full of lies,

Every time she cries,

Her heart slowly dies.

 

Reviews

[ROSALIND]

Sad but dark

Says a lot in just a few lines well said

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Amazing lines, full of emotions. Hope to see you return to WritersCafe soon. :)

[Stephen]

Haha! Lovely .. I love this one...everybody wants to get swum into the blue eyes but yeah, blue are ..full of lies ..lol but you know what? People still love to get swim into those blue eyes all night with smiles just for saying at an end of the night ..Beautiful Goodbyes :) Haha ..How funny .. I adore this shorty piece.

[FallenHeroXx]

S**t..
THis is powerful stuff you're playing around with..
Good job!

100/100

Fallen

[Draven]

It says a lot in those 4 lines. I like that.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

four verses, few words ... sublime poetry ! Great metrica, great rhythm, great images, simple but full os pathos, it's simply amazing.
Great job !

[R.M.W.]

I love it. Such a short poem can have deep meaning.
In the last line is "lowly" supposed to be "slowly"?

[Baby Ricochet]

Good rhyming pattern. Great Job

[Scott Mou]

Nice Rhyming, I like it!

Keep Up The Good Work