Grandmaw's W***e House

When they walk in you give them a smile.

And hug them like you haven't seen them in a while.

Oh and look they brought their girlfriends too!

But trust me when I say the're not here to meet you.

You don't care when they take them to the room in the back.

To do something that would probably give you a heart attack.

You have unknowingly given them a place to full around.

Without being worried of being found.

You give these boys too much trust.

Now they have a place to express their lust.

They bring a new girl over almost every night

And stay in the room till mornings light.

You think they just haven't found the right girl

But Granny the truth would make your head swirl.

Everyone knows of Grandmaw's W***e House.

Everyone but you and you're clueless spouse.

So while they are in the back about to get "lucky".

You are in the living room learning how to stuff a 'ducky".

But I guess that's just another day,

At Grandmaw's W***e House where ANYONE can play.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Based on a true story.....fucked up right...

Reviews

[Sarah Lynn]

What a great poem! I love the rhyming in it as well! A true story ..whaaa? lol

[Destinyxi]

Oh god the images I got from this poem, nasty haha.

I like how you spelled Grandmaw. This poem was interesting and fun to read. A bit twisted but that's alright :P

Thanks for sharing!

[CriticalxxAngel]

I love your writing but the fact that this was actually true is screwed up. Anyway I really liked how you wrote and expressed it.

[Wolfwind]

The world can create some interesting and crazy places, that is for sure. Your piece is woven really well to make it clear and evident that such a place truly exists and it isn't something that you would approve of. I like the way that this piece almost came across some humor, tales of the crypt type anyway. lol

Great Ink! I think you meant "Fool around" at the end of line 7.

Aaron - Wolfwind

[Lexi Villanueva]

In a way I found this poem funny but
it is sick that this actully happened.
This is still a good poem! 100

[Keith LaFountaine]

Interesting work. I'm watching "Deadwood" right now (an HBO show about the old west) and they touch on this topic quite a bit. Nicely written. Only suggestion: in the 7th line, "full around" should be "food around".

[Baby Ricochet]

Boys and girls do what they do. Good poem

[B-poet]

A interesting tale of lust & liaisions. A true story that's doomed to have a screwed up ending. Nice work. A thought-provoking read. :)