Ex Boyfriends suck

Tears have fallen.

And words were said.

But the love we once knew,

Will forever be dead.

 

I walked away,

Expecting you to chase.

But you didn't move.

You just stood in place.

 

I tried to come back,

And work things out.

But you wouldn't hear of it.

All you did was shout.

 

So now I've moved on.

And even found someone knew.

I guess now your happy,

I'm finally over you.

 

My life has been great!

No more tears have been shed.

But now you've come back.

And it feels like there's a gun to my head.

 

You tell me you miss me.

And want me back.

You said you were stupid.

For letting our love get off track.

 

But something doesn't feel right,

When you say you love me only.

In fact it sounds like,

You're only getting lonely.

 

So do us both a favor,

And grow some balls!

Until then,

I'm ignoring all your calls.

 

So go back to the girl,

You left laying in your bed.

Did you think I was stupid?

Or did you fall on your head.

 

Ex boyfriends suck.

They are like a blood sucking tick.

And trust me when I say,

My ex is a dick.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

EX BOYFRIENDS SUCKKKKKK.....you didn't want me when I wanted you???But because things did work out with your new girl you want me back??? sorry!!! IT DONT WORK THAT WAYYYY. I know the poem is all over the place but it was written so I could let some feelings out.

Reviews

[Sarah Lynn]

YES ! This is perfection !!! LOVE LOVE LOVE this !!!

[CriticalxxAngel]

I gotta say I love this poem. I could feel the emotion behind it and I completely agree. Ex boyfriends suck because they only want you when your with someone else and don't appreciate when they had you. Great Job! :)

[Krista Weiss]

Wow! Really great poem!! All guys suck in general haha!

[Keith LaFountaine]

You've got a lot of emotional vibes in this, not all of them pleasant. You've got pretty good flow as well. Nice job!

[eatmills]

This fine piece of poetry doesn't seem scattered to me. I see the quality of your writing has grown. It's methodical, storylined, concluded and I love the timing.

Fave verse don't have one... I have many.

Cheers from the North

[Chula]

I love this poem alot :) I think that it is a bit similar to alot of my writing I hope you can take the time to take a quick look at it :D I think you have alot of talent

[Destinyxi]

The rhymes sound a bit forced. Like this part:

I walked away,
Expecting you to chase.

[Destinyxi]

for some reason it cut off the rest of my comment lol

[Destinyxi]

those lines sounded forced, especially chase because the sentence is incomplete.

I'd also change this part:
In fact it sounds like,
You're only getting lonely.

to "You've gotten lonely"

[K.]

Love it. especially the ending. They always turn out to be dicks in the end.
good flow, great expression. incredibly relatable

[FelicityAllona]

This is great!!! :))

I dont know what to write here because I have never been in a relationship but base on your poem, he really subks!!!

I enjoyed reading this. :))

[B-poet]

Great write. It would really suck if you saw them on a regular basis when you would rather not. Great work. Keep penning on. :)

[Secret Lullaby]

Thank you for the review:))