Whispers

I feel it all around me

The whispers.

The looks.

It is never ending.

Everday

All day.

Why wont it end?

Why wont it stop?

I cant tell,

What is real.

What is fake.

Its all the same.

It will never change.

The whispers.

The looks.

When will it end.

I need it to end.

Author's Note

It is whatever you want it to be.

Reviews

[FelicityAllona]

Oh my!!! This is marvelous!!!
Well written

[Lexi Villanueva]

We all have had felt this way once
In our lives but this gud. I love
It!-1000000000 - if I could!

[brandon]

I think every one has felt like this at some point

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Great poem!!!

[Keith LaFountaine]

Very intense emotion in such a small space. You certainly know how to pick and choose your words for quality so they pack a punch to your reader. I love the style (and the font to be honest haha). It all adds to your atmosphere that you've created. Excellent work!

[Ees]

I like it. It was kind of to the point and the repetitive circular motion just sounds like a natural thought loop. Amazing job!

[Baby Ricochet]

Whispers from real people is gossip. Whispers in your head is schitzophrenia. Good, punchy little poem

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Who cares about whispers, ignore them ! ;)

[Peter H]

it feels like the person within the poem is in despair , to the point where it became a psychosis . their melancholy seems excruciating i like this piece i shall revisit

[Silas]

I love this because I wrote something just like this a couple years ago. It's very nice and I feel it deep, even if it wasn't intened too. Congradulations on another succes.