The Broken Heart of the Living Dead

Forever laying in the ground.

Always lost and never found.

Sourrounded by the memories of pain,

That could never be washed away by the rain.

Forgotten by the one I loved.

My heart was broken, pushed, and shoved.

I will never forget the day you lied.

Because that was the day my heart had died.

Now I'm laying in the ground.

Always lost and never found.

Sourrounded by so much dred.

The broken heart of the living dead.

Reviews

[Silas]

How do you write such beautiful stuff that brings up such horrid memories for me? Please tell me I'd love to know.

[anxia]

such a magnificent poem. The rhyming, the flow , everything is absolutely exquisite.

[B-poet]

You've conveyed the most heartfelt emotional pain in vivid detail. Great job here, I love the written structure, tone, and overall theme as well. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Heavy. Good write

[R.M.W.]

I love the last verse "the broken heart of the living dead"
Thanks for sending me the request, I really enjoyed reading it :)

[Krista Weiss]

Aww! So sad!! :( Amazing poem thought!!!

[Country Girl]

This is a great piece of writing, very depressing, but good at the same time.!! (:

[Secret Lullaby]

The moment you realize you didnt mean as much to someone as you thought...can kill you

[Time's The Bond]

Depressing