I miss you.....

I miss you.....

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

I miss you

I miss your smile

I miss the things we use to do.

I wish you could hold me for a while.

 

I miss the things you use to say.

I miss the talks at night.

I miss seeing you everyday.

I wish we never had that fight.

 

I miss knowing you were mine.

I miss never being a afraid.

I miss our love so divine.

I wish I never got played.....

 

© 2013 Secret Lullaby


Author's Note

Secret Lullaby
So I wrote this a few months ago about an ex....the same person I wrote "I'm Sorry" for.... and believe me when I say I DONT miss him. But at this point I really did.
RIP Leslie&Tristin

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Beautifully written!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


good work nice flow of words

Posted 11 Years Ago


I totally get you, and could tell you a sad story but this is a review, right?. It flowed great, and I liked the comsistancy too, it adds to the ending. Nice poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Missing a boyfriend or girlfriend who you've truly loved from the get go becomes a humbling experience after their gone when break-ups happen. Absence does make the heart grow fonder. Great job writing this poem. I hear your message loud and clear. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


We've all been through this kind of pain, and as writers, I'm sure we've all written on it, and I love how your writing seems more personal, not just for yourself, but for the reader as well. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


It was a great write! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Been there. It hurts for a while but when it's over you end up happier eventually. Great work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

I can relate to this poem as well. In fact I was with him for 4 years! But im much happyeir now!
Its sweet

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice write.... I can picture yourself in this piece. Very emotional. Keep penning my friend:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I am in love with this!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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It a new year and a new me. I have deleted my old information and have decided to start over. Life is full of ups and downs, disapointments, regrets, mistakes...but all these things make us who were a.. more..

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