The Devils War

Rise up and join the fight.

Everything will change after tonight.

Come on men be brave.

Victory is something I crave.

Unleash your darkest desires.

Throw your fears into the fires.

Let the demons take control.

And lets bust out of this Hellhole.

Listen for my battle cry!

Soon the Angels will fly.

Show them no remorse.

Take them down by force.

Defeat is something I won't allow.

Our time is now!

Now unfold your wings.

Soon boys we will be kings.

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Author's Note

Im not done with this yet. I had to leave befor I could finish typing to i went ahead and published it. Will Add More Soon. But so far its about Lucifer wanting to start a war with Heaven.

Reviews

[scripted]

war for me is no option unless your eating at the devils lies... with that being said i must also put that aside and say that this write was a very good piece... i love the ryhming and flow this write has. I hope to read the rest soon! thank you for sharing, yours truely Danielle

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Defiantly finish it soon cant wait to here the rest of it. One of the best poems i have read since joining the sight i love it.

[TheArtOfInsanity]

I love this write so much, Show them no remorse.
Take them down by force.
Defeat is something I won't allow.
Our time is now!
Now unfold your wings.
Soon boys we will be kings.

Those are probably my favorite lines from the poem.

[Krista Weiss]

Really great so far! :)

[Daniel]

**comes in with suit and armor* Hell yeah b*****s let's go! >:} but no seriously cool one and since you're not finished I'll just put down the knife and cestus and wait till you do :) It's great so far :D

[ObscurityNone]

This is pretty good for being unfinished, and a delightful topic; to put it lightly. x)

[SamanthaMarie]

You should listen to the song 'Son Of the Morning" by Oh, Sleeper.

[Zachary_James]

Amazing, stunning, magnifficent that's all i have to say.

[B-poet]

Evil's battle cry is well heard after reading this spiritual war creed. Nice job. :)

[Time's The Bond]

NICE