The Other Women

You tell me you love me.

You act like you care.

You hold me in your arms.

And run you fingers through my hair.

 

You tell me you will leave her soon,

And that everything will be ok.

But you are only with me at night.

And with her all day.

 

I'm sick of waiting.

And I'm tired of this secret I must keep.

Everything is falling apart.

Your lies are too deep.

 

You hold her in your arms.

And whisper your lies.

With each day that comes,

A part of me dies.

 

I can't take it any more!

Soon you will have to choose.

You cant have us both.

So one of us will lose.

 

You tell me you love me.

You act like you care.

But im done playing your games!

I don't like to share.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Being the other women sucks!!!

Reviews

[emman]

Yes it is..other way around it also sucks to be the other man (based on my experience) :(..but then I realized that I'm not worthy to be fooled :)
Don't let this guy hurt you (YOU DON'T DESERVE TO BE FOOLED,right?)
Be the PRETTY WOMAN not the OTHER WOMAN..you deserve the right guy..
Right? Be strong and positive..your prince charming (MAN OF YOUR LIFE) is on his way..just wait :)

The poem is so good..I can feel your heartaches..

Just live your day happily and ignore negative vibes..

and don't forget to..............................SMILE! SMILE! SMILE! SMILE! SMILE! :D

[Secret Lullaby]

Wow thank you so much

[emman]

very much welcome :)

[scripted]

i know you like this guy, but you must realize that this isn't meant to be... if it were he would be there for you and see that playing two girls isn't right if one is looking for true love... with that being said i must also say that you are to pretty to be stuck on some guy who at heart is an ugly person... i love the write and also the flow of rythem. thank you for sharing, yours truely Danielle

[Secret Lullaby]

Thanks you sooo much!

[C.C. Marx]

Never settle for being the other woman, if he can't make the decision, make it from him. Dump and him and find someone who deserves you....nice write

[Secret Lullaby]

Yeah thanks(:

[C.C. Marx]

My pleasure, hope things work out for you!!

[SamanthaMarie]

Ooooooh, love this. My kind of drama ;P

[Christopher Booyakasha]

I don't think you should be the other woman. you way too pretty. you deserve to be treated like a queen

[Secret Lullaby]

awww thanks(:

[Aly]

wow. i liked this. great job

[Secret Lullaby]

thanks(: