You Dont Know

They dont care.

About all your problems.

So stop trying.

Its pathetic.

You are not alone.

You are not forgotten.

You are loved.

You are safe.

Why do you want more attention?

You dont know what It's like.

To be truely afrade.

Or to be broken.

You dont know what people have to go through.

Or what they are PUT through.

You have never been lost.

What more do you want!

You crticize others.

Make them feel worse.

You put their problems to the side.

And try to push yours onto them.
They are hurt.

They are weak.

They are damaged.

So stop.

You dont understand.

Whats really going on around you.

And you never will.

Wake up.

And look around you.

You are losing everyone.

Grow up.

Change your ways.

Time is going by.

And you still act the same way you did years ago.

Nothing has changed but your age.

And everyone is finally sick of it.

I was.

And I left.

Now they are too.

So stop.

Befor everyone is gone.

And then you will know what its like to be alone.

 

 

http://youtu.be/61IVpTn6tuo    <<<<< YOU WILL NEVER UNDERSTAND

Author's Note

This is just something I have been wanting to say to someone for a long time

Reviews

[Britt]

Good poem:P You dont know Jack; Luke bryan is a good song. :P

[Secret Lullaby]

hahah yeah!!(:

[Britt]

If that was the youtube link, then i feel dumb. im at work so i cant view it. xD

[Secret Lullaby]

No its not(: I was going to put that but then I found this video that is kinda what the poem is about. ''What this person doesnt understand"

[Britt]

ah, okay. I was gonna feel stupid, ahah. and i see:P

[Secret Lullaby]

haha(:

[SamanthaMarie]

This would be an awesome rap...

[R.M.W.]

Sometimes it seems like everybody always has their head up their a*s. They are too absorbed in their own lives to notice anybody else around them is hurting. This is a really good write though :)

[Secret Lullaby]

Exactly!

[Rhea752]

Nice

[Secret Lullaby]

thanks(:

[C.C. Marx]

Some people need to get their heads out of the clouds and live. Some people have no idea how wonderful they are cuz all they worry about is what people think. I like the way you wrote this, with a strong message comes a strong voice from an even stronger writer. Great job

[RavenWells]

This was brimming with emotion. You can tell that this was written from the heart. Nice job :)

[Secret Lullaby]

Thank you

[Time's The Bond]

A nice stern hint and a clear strict message show this to that person and hope they can read! :-)

As I always ask/say:
Please do read/review some of my stuff as well :-)

[Secret Lullaby]

Thanks for the review(: