You Dont Know

They dont care.

About all your problems.

So stop trying.

Its pathetic.

You are not alone.

You are not forgotten.

You are loved.

You are safe.

Why do you want more attention?

You dont know what It's like.

To be truely afrade.

Or to be broken.

You dont know what people have to go through.

Or what they are PUT through.

You have never been lost.

What more do you want!

You crticize others.

Make them feel worse.

You put their problems to the side.

And try to push yours onto them.
They are hurt.

They are weak.

They are damaged.

So stop.

You dont understand.

Whats really going on around you.

And you never will.

Wake up.

And look around you.

You are losing everyone.

Grow up.

Change your ways.

Time is going by.

And you still act the same way you did years ago.

Nothing has changed but your age.

And everyone is finally sick of it.

I was.

And I left.

Now they are too.

So stop.

Befor everyone is gone.

And then you will know what its like to be alone.

 

 

http://youtu.be/61IVpTn6tuo    <<<<< YOU WILL NEVER UNDERSTAND

Author's Note

This is just something I have been wanting to say to someone for a long time

Reviews

[TheArtOfInsanity]

I fully agree with this message. i'm always trying to play the part of the guy who's always there, but there are people who don't have it as bad as they think, I don't wanna say anything that might seem insensitive, but at the same time I want to yell at them, tell them to wake up, their life isn't that bad, there are people who love them, and that they're pushing them away with their attitude. Very strong piece

[B-poet]

Nice. There are a lot people out there nowadays who are just stuck in their own ways and just don't want to change for the better.. The funny thing about is they just get left behind because of the forever changing times. Great illustration of this. Great work. :)

[The Nude Writer]

Oh, I thought this was a poem about "You Dont Know Jack" I used to play that game with my friends all the time :)

Great poem! I hate when people don't understand, and then that feeling when you are trying to break into their heads and make them see things your way. I'm not sure if those were your feelings, but thats what I got from it :)

[ℰmerald ⚓]

Everybody has to get something off their chest once in a while but more people need to come out and say the stuff like this. This is the kind if stuff that people listen to and follow. Blew me away, great job and well said.

[Personne]

Everyone needs to speak their thoughts more often(: It would help a lot mith miscommunication:B

[Faffy]

Wow this is actually what some people need to hear its great to find this on hear it really speaks to anybody. Absolutely loved this 999988/100

Subbed' and shelved

Well done :)

Roshan

[ROSALIND]

OH THIS REALLY SPOKE TO MY HEART LIKE AN ARROW PIERCING RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE SO 10/10

[paparapapa]

Well, i guess there are really people who can be selfish, insensitive and tactless, and... Dense. They may not realize it, so I think you should really say this to that someone (in a gentler way) so that it wont end up like what your poem says. :) but then again, that's easier said than done. Anyway, the poem was straightforward, and the message ia crystal clear. It also had great flow. Great job.

Oh, and just some errors. "Afraid" and some typos here and there. :)

[Secret Lullaby]

Thanks
:)

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! Really great poem! :)

[emmy bon]

love it;