Welcome To hell

Burn!!

I want them all to burn!

I crave for their screams!

To hear them beg for forgivness.

I'm out for blood.

Their tears mean nothing to me!

I have no pity for the damned.

Yes..Yes..Yes...

Oh the sweet saticfaction.

I can almost taste their fear.

Its like my own personal drug.

Scream!

I want to hear you scream!

More..More..MORE!!

They will be mine for eternity.

Forever they will burn!

Welcome To Hell B*****s hahahahaha

 

 

Author's Note

I have no idea what was going through my head when i wrote this...no more funny tasting water for me

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

: ) It's not so bad down here. It gets a little warm and we get to choose what happens to the person who follows us down here, so there is always some sort of musing qualities to be had. Was your inspiration something short of what road rage would be?! lol I Loved it..... L.I.P. Live in peace because it's Hell on Earth. ; ) xoxo -Mark

[Secret Lullaby]

hahaha I was just super pissed off:) yeah I heard the weather is nice down there at this time of year:))))

[Patrick Henry]

Nice!! It's about 89 degrees, air condition isn't working, and it's 11:50pm. If there were showers in Hell.... I'm game. lol My best friends probably went to Hell..... : ) xox -Mark

[Secret Lullaby]

hahaha

[Patrick Henry]

Road trip!! lol Wouldn't it be sweet to be the "Peter at the Gates" version, but down in Hell where you get to see the bullies and/or ones that you knew and deserved to be there in that moment, and you get to ...nudge them along into Hell's Gate?! : ) ...even get a poker. xxo -Mark

[Secret Lullaby]

That..Would..Be..AWESOME!!!!!!!! It would be like a "payback b***h" moment!

[Patrick Henry]

I vote YES on "payback B***h"!! : ) Maybe, even play a little 80's rock ballad music in the background when all they see are our smiles. lol Definitely awesome!! xox -Mark

[Caradoc]

This would totally be a heavy screamo song. There's a lot of animosity for "sinners" in this piece. One could postulate that a demon wrote it. After all, if anyone would enjoy the suffering of a damned soul, would it not make sense for it to be a native of Hell?

Interesting write. Perhaps the water was worth the sip.

I would also like to point you to the song, Wildfire by Sonata Arctica. Is has enough fire and mayhem in it to satisfy even the most jaded of Hell's legions. ;p

-Caradoc

[KeeD]

This seems almost lyrical. I can feel the intensity of each sentence as it consumes and craves for all hell to let loose. Kudos, I enjoyed it.

[Nick.B]

Interesting write, very dark and raw, you've managed to create a great disturbing(in a good way) painting with your words...great job, love it

[J.R. Asor_28]

This is great! I can imagine the devil screaming this once I enter the gateway to hell! Pure evil! I like this!

[Baby Ricochet]

I've been there. Good write

[Country Girl]

Anger problems much.!?

[Secret Lullaby]

At this moment.....YES:)

[Country Girl]

lol, I love u oh so much.!! (:

[Secret Lullaby]

Im just that loveable:)

[Country Girl]

yes i know

[Secret Lullaby]

haha:)

[TheArtOfInsanity]

This, so far, has to be my favorite within all of your writings, such a sinister feel to it, cold and cruel, a different style from what I've read from you so far. You have my kudos for branching out :]

[Secret Lullaby]

Thanks:)

[Blue Ivory]

Oh God I love this so much! I love the last part where you're laughing. It's all raw emotions. I really like this!

[s y e]

Woah. Someone was angry when they wrote this.

[Secret Lullaby]

you have nooo idea

[s y e]

Oh I think I do. I can tell! Haha

[Secret Lullaby]

hahah yeah I guess everybody can lol(:

[s y e]

Yup :p Haha

[Wolfwind]

Wow! That was one powerful explosion of negative energy. That's when all the eye brows raise and the men step aside to let the woman have her way. =D
It was an awesome flow of word and the description carried the meaning along just fine. Hopefully though it allowed you to release that pent up rage so I don't read about fires and brimstone in the newspaper! ;)

Great Ink!
Aaron

[Secret Lullaby]

Thank yo uso much for your review(: