Welcome To hell

Burn!!

I want them all to burn!

I crave for their screams!

To hear them beg for forgivness.

I'm out for blood.

Their tears mean nothing to me!

I have no pity for the damned.

Yes..Yes..Yes...

Oh the sweet saticfaction.

I can almost taste their fear.

Its like my own personal drug.

Scream!

I want to hear you scream!

More..More..MORE!!

They will be mine for eternity.

Forever they will burn!

Welcome To Hell B*****s hahahahaha

 

 

Author's Note

I have no idea what was going through my head when i wrote this...no more funny tasting water for me

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

: ) It's not so bad down here. It gets a little warm and we get to choose what happens to the person who follows us down here, so there is always some sort of musing qualities to be had. Was your inspiration something short of what road rage would be?! lol I Loved it..... L.I.P. Live in peace because it's Hell on Earth. ; ) xoxo -Mark

[Secret Lullaby]

hahaha I was just super pissed off:) yeah I heard the weather is nice down there at this time of year:))))

[Patrick Henry]

Nice!! It's about 89 degrees, air condition isn't working, and it's 11:50pm. If there were showers in Hell.... I'm game. lol My best friends probably went to Hell..... : ) xox -Mark

[Secret Lullaby]

hahaha

[Patrick Henry]

Road trip!! lol Wouldn't it be sweet to be the "Peter at the Gates" version, but down in Hell where you get to see the bullies and/or ones that you knew and deserved to be there in that moment, and you get to ...nudge them along into Hell's Gate?! : ) ...even get a poker. xxo -Mark

[Secret Lullaby]

That..Would..Be..AWESOME!!!!!!!! It would be like a "payback b***h" moment!

[Patrick Henry]

I vote YES on "payback B***h"!! : ) Maybe, even play a little 80's rock ballad music in the background when all they see are our smiles. lol Definitely awesome!! xox -Mark

[Cole Thomas]

Nice introduction to hell, you really lit the page up.

[AaronFreitas]

Lmao at the authors note... I felt so serious anger in this write... but I loved it!

[Stephen]

In this poem, there's no rhyme but believe me I just read this stuff with a rhyme like a pretty cool song ... but yeah .. I couldn't scream this song loud as I wanted to ..just cause of a beautiful and a very stunning LAST line .. lol How funny .. "(Kidding)"

I love this song, yeah ..to me, it's a song. I love your work, i'd like to look forward reading your some more impressive stuffs.

[Scott Mou]

w...wow. Just wow. This oozes intensity and makes me afraid to meet you in a dark alley. Good job

[Akshay Rawal]

I think all the dead people would have heard this monologue of the devil after leaving this world,when they were punished for their sins.....Cool this is...And let me know about anything new you write

[Brandon S. Whitten]

I once had the feeling, understandable and will soon outgrow. Excellent read and write. Sorry you have to live in Alabama, it is backwards there.

[Mark]

Okay. Right to the point, no apology, no holding back. I like it.

[krish]

Nice write, you've written from heart. Nice flow.