Hell Hole

Hell Hole

A Poem by Secret Lullaby

These thoughts in my head,

Make me wish I was dead.

The truth will never be found.

Especially when I'm six feet in the ground.

I'm too weak to even cry.

Damn I'm sick of this lie.

I'm just waiting on my turn,

For me to go to Hell and burn.

The demons in my mind,

Want me to do things that are not kind.

When I close my eyes I see,

These demons becoming free.

Soon they will have complet control.

And my soul will forever burn in the Hell Hole

© 2012 Secret Lullaby


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great write !

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow!! Such a great poem!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is real powerful... but wait, is this a song?

I was singing the lyrics to the tune of 'Beneath my Bed' by of Monsters and Men

it fits perfectly, and similar message

Posted 12 Years Ago


Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

kk
Secret Lullaby

12 Years Ago

You're right it does kinda sound like it(:
Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

yep yep
"I'm too weak to even cry." Crazy feeling. This feels hopeless, just waiting to be for punishment for eternity. And then the demons, everyone can relate to that. We have to fight human nature sometimes just to be kind. This poem just opens up the real and ugly side of people. And it also shows how giving up is just so easy! I really love this. Yeah, great write(: Also the rhyming is great! Flows nicely.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Secret Lullaby

12 Years Ago

Thanks(:
The truth will never be found.
Especially when I'm six feet in the ground.
I don't know why but I love these lines, makes me think of the song The Dead Can't Testify by Billy Talent. Very well written and it paints a beautiful picture... beautiful in the deathful (I know it isn't a word :P) way...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Secret Lullaby

12 Years Ago

LOVE THE SONG!!
Secret Lullaby

12 Years Ago

This song is going to be in my head for the rest of the day now:D
Ella

12 Years Ago

Yes! Victory! :D
And good, haha! :) It's been stuck in my head for like a week, lol
Reading this shook me. Reminds me of the Zodiak killer. Very nice description and way to make it sound tense :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Secret Lullaby

12 Years Ago

Thanks(:

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Added on September 25, 2012
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It a new year and a new me. I have deleted my old information and have decided to start over. Life is full of ups and downs, disapointments, regrets, mistakes...but all these things make us who were a.. more..

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